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标题: 葬花词英汉对照 [打印本页]

作者: quantum 时间: 11.9.2003 11:46
葬花词英汉对照zz 花谢花飞花满天， As blossoms fade and fly across the sky, 红消香断有谁怜？ Who pities the faded red,the scent that has been? 游丝软系飘春榭， Softly the gossamer floats over spring pavilions, 落絮轻沾扑绣帘。 Gently the willow fluff wafts to the embroidered screen. 闺中女儿惜春暮， A girl in her chamber mourns the passing of spring, 愁绪满怀无释处。 No relief from anxiety her poor heart knows; 手把花锄出绣闺， Hoe in hand she steps through her portal, 忍踏落花来复去。 Loath to tread on the blossom as she comes and goes. 丝榆荚自芳菲， Willows and elms,fresh and verdant, 不管桃飘与李飞。 Care not if peach and plum blossom drift away; 桃李明年能再发， Next year the peach and plum blossom drift away; 明年闺中知有谁？ But her chamber may stand empty on that day. 三月香巢已垒成， By the third month the scented nests are built, 梁间燕子太无情！ But the swallows on the beam are heartless all; 明年花发虽可啄， Next year,though once again you may peck the buds, 却不到人去梁空巢也倾。 From the beam of an empty room your nest will fall. 一年三百六十日， Each year for three hundred and sixty days 风端剑严相逼。 The cutting wind and biting frost contend. 明南妍能几时， How long can beauty flowers fresh and fair? 一朝漂泊难寻觅。 In a single day wine can whirl it to its end. 花开易见落难寻， Fallen,the brightest blooms are hard to find; 阶前闷死葬花人。 With aching heart their grave-digger comes now 独倚花锄泪暗洒， Alone,her hoe in hand,her secret tears 洒上空枝见血痕。 Falling like drops of blood on each bare bough. 杜鹃无语正黄昏， Dusk falls and the cuckoo is silent; 荷锄归去掩重门。 Her hoe brought back,the lodge is locked and still; 青灯照壁人初睡， A green lamp lights the wall as sleep enfolds her, 冷雨敲壁被未温。 Cold rain pelts the casement and her quilt is chill. 怪奴底事悲伤神， What causes my two-fold anguish? 半为怜春半恼春。 Love for spring and resentment of spring; 怜春忽至恼忽去， For suddenly it comes and suddenly goes, 至又无言去不闻。 Its arrival unheralded,noiseless in departing. 昨宵庭外悲歌发， Last night from the courtyard floated a sad song 知是花魂与鸟魂？ Was it the soul of blossom,the soul of birds. 花魂鸟魂总难留， Hard to detain,the soul of blossom or birds? 鸟自无言花自羞。 For blossoms have no assurance,birds no word. 愿奴肋下生双翼， I long to take wing and fly 随花飞到天尽头。 With the flowers to earth's uttermost bound; 天尽头， And yet at earth's uttermost bound 何处有香丘？ Where can a fragrant burial mound be found? 未若锦囊收艳骨， Better shroud the fair petals in silk 一捧净土掩风流。 With clean earth for their outer attire; 质本洁来还洁去， For pure you came and pure shall go, 强于污淖陷渠沟。 Not sinking into some soul ditch or mire. 尔今死去侬收葬， Now you are dead I came to bury you; 未卜侬身何日哀？ None has divined the day when I shall die; 侬今葬花人笑痴， Men laugh at my folly in burying fallen flowers, 他年葬侬知是谁？ But who will bury me when dead I lie? 试看春残花渐落， See,when spring draws to a close and flowers fall, 便是红颜老死时。 This is the season when beauy must ebb and fade; 一朝春尽红颜老， The day that spring takes wing and beaty fades

作者: 红袖添香 时间: 11.9.2003 15:15
..........还是汉字美一些... 英文能不能也押韵一些?

作者: quantum 时间: 11.9.2003 15:38
任何古诗翻译成英文都成“现代诗”了，因为英文没法讲究“7个字一句”或“5个字一句”；就算单词数控制住了，字母数也控制不住啊。所以无论如何，翻译的古诗是绝对不如汉语原诗的。 <!--emo&

--><img src='https://www.kaiyuan.info/modules/ipboard/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'> 韵脚有啊；每段的第二句和第四句都至少押韵的。 总体说来，这首“葬花吟”翻译得算是难得的了。 <!--emo&

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